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Old 09-18-2007, 11:53 PM    (permalink
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I’m not a C.E.O. but I handle business,
My very presence makes you all tense,
Talkin spit like I give a **** just don’t make sense,
I got a mind for breakin spines, ******* try to take mine,
This raw line will give em a taste of Columbine,
Columbia, Columbas, Christopher, feel the heat when im dissin ya,
And this whiskey make me more pissier,
Instead of ya mom it’ll be my n9ne kissin ya goodnight,
Dude why you throw the fight? Either It was really that easy to win or I musta did something right,
Yea im something nice, Been crushin **** since machines were crushin ice,
Fiends crushin white wet my appetite, nice **** on a dyke imma still hit it twice,
if she don’t rock my person you know she rockin my mic,
Sent from the Afterlife killin since a prototype,
If you don’t feel the hot lead, then it’s a cool knife cutting through the night,
Suspend ya of life then run away laughing like a lunatic never back in sight,
Time and place, is a place called home,
You can’t plant my bones, Cuz I roam alone,
You can tell by my mentality misdemeanor that I’m a rolling stone,
I try my best Excel at will, Ball like a court and murder like a kill,
Strong like the steel, atributes pure skill, we both in agreement like a deal,
Handed down like a will, I know you wont miss me when i leave,
But best believe, When I depart this plain of existence i take all of me,
Leavin nothin left but a small mountain of flesh, take all you can get it while its fresh,
Apply it to life then breath a final breath this is death....this is death...
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Old 09-28-2007, 12:21 AM    (permalink
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So really whatchu sayin?
If we went toe to toe youíd be the one laying,
Or maybe you lyiní, Im a lion from Zion homeboy you dropped the Iron,
I donít know how you feel you in the same league as I am,
Im like the NFL and you on that Arena ****,
I Arenas ****, Hibachi fire grill peal caps on the real kid,
Top of the food chain carnivores as ever ,
Call me Johnny Cleaver goin for the sever,
I laugh at destiny,
For me only slick walkin kept you outta penitentiary,
Stay clean as long as you can,
Back me in a corner meet the son of Sam,
But not Sam I Am,
I conquer land to expand to meet the final plans,
You donít wanna know what I do to keep mine,
Just know it involves many blades and slicing of the spine,
The world is mine, Psychopath on the loose,
Ready to loot, and not afraid to shoot,
Stand up quick, get layed out flat,
Been known to pop out quick wit bottle or bat,
Iím sorry to end this I know itís premature,
But donít let me catch you around nomore.
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Old 09-28-2007, 12:43 AM    (permalink
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You got TR started,
Also known as The Rampage,
Call me The Rapture or The Reckless,
Whatever you call me,
It better be sir,
Cuz The Resurrection has started and The Rhymes are pure,
Bring me the best and get beaten by the Beast,
Hope your not standing for these rhymes ***** better take a seat,
I try when I spit to stay on top of it,
But when that topic switch up your far from stoppin it,
Ay what up man! If you got the money then I got the grams,
Put it in my hand if its on scam, Dude try to get low then you hear a blam,
If you doubt my steez best check my resume,
Even if not by name purely driven by fame,
The Lore of These streets is Legend but they never learn,
Try to step around my feet and they steppin on my toes,
Shoes are that big to fill, Even the Lord knows,
Try as you may time and again,
Just say where and I’ll say when,
Many men, wish death upon me,
The light in my eyes dog and I cant see,
I hurt they family ****** with me,
Next level is to take there life away,
Nowhere to back to,
Movement is limited,
I’m in the Safety Zone and your on the ledge trick,
Push you off kid, baby soft like a ******* chest prick,

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Old 10-16-2007, 11:47 PM    (permalink
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When I come through its nothing short of phenomenon,
Reminiscing on the days without money in palm,
Growing up wit a chip on my shoulder,
Got bolder as I got older with the whole world weighin down like boulder,
Kick rocks, got my adrenaline goin like missed shots,
Couldn’t afford the proper container so bagged up in zip locks,
You think you know but you have no idea,
Now I got the proper gear ends meet more then once,
Give me the face lady and I’ll eat these ******* like lunch,
Oh no crunch time is here, too many honeys rollin with the entourage queers disappear,
Let me break it down for you before you press your luck,
If you have your plate in arm reach I’m sure to eat it up,
Not sayin we gangsta’s not sayin we thugs,
But LL Mama said knock you out and Hov said move drugs,
Step In The Arena, Eric B for Dead Prez,
Don’t buy into the Propaganda or let it get to your heads,
Or speak around big ears wit connects to the feds,
Now I’m Ready To Die, Since Hip Hop no longer lives,
I’m tryin to get it like Frank Lucas and buy like 9 cribs,
Shortie got that swaggah she bringin sexy back,
If I see dude get too fresh wit her, Im bringin bat to back,
Back to back you know the outcome of that,
Yea yea all scared and I’ll leave you right there,
They call me a beast and my hands start waggin when I smell fear,
None of that in here, if you just chill u’ll appear clear and ill just look through you like Snake Eyes in Metal Gear.
Im hazardous rippin through you like greenhouse gas through your atmosphere
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Old 10-25-2007, 01:13 PM    (permalink
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Me and My B**** 2007…
Just me and my b****, me and my b**** , me and my b****,
Just me and my b****, me and my b**** , me and my b****,
Just me and my b****,

Just me and my b****, Index got a twitch,
So I played with the Clitoris until Orgasm reached prime hit,
She screamed and it rang out like a shot,
She warm to the touch burnin up, then she right back on my c***,
She always getting me into some kind of trouble,
Im her Fred Flint and she my Barney Rubble,
We go everywhere together,
When she start to run off at the mouth I always let her,
Cuz it’s never aimed towards me only aimed at he,
Wutever mother****** wanna get Gul-ly,
I silence her at times when we gotta be quiet,
When she pop out her head theres sure to be a riot,
Cant take her to the airport or the courthouse,
But she always goes wit me to parties and the crack house,
Packed house everybody got cheese one look from mami and everybody freeze,
She got it like that, and big homie got her back,
Im always with her and everyone thinks that im crazy,
Its us against the world baby, just me and my lady,

Just me and my b****, me and my b**** , me and my b****,
Just me and my b****, me and my b**** , me and my b****,
Just me and my b****,

Just me and my b****, chillin quiet evening at home, oh no there goes the phone,
No not Lil Ray they caught him all alone banged him up real good now its on,
When theres beef she the one I turn to,
She always down to ride and I tell her I’ll never hurt you,
We arrive at the spot where them bastards chill,
She just hangs out the window starts talking ill,
One drops two drops thirds lookin like a cherry gum drop,
Momma outta **** to say so we let the pedal drop,
Put some distance between us and them,
Lay low for awhile then we back at it again,
I say we need to split up for awhile,
Take her to my mans spot and let the heat style,
This time apart may be just long enough to kill me,
But Until shes in my arms again...Its me and Mack Milly,

Just me and my b****, me and my b**** , me and my b****,
Just me and my b****, me and my b**** , me and my b****,
Just me and my b****,
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My influence spans Distant planets and galaxies,
If you Ali G's wanna challenge me ill disect ur anatomy graphicly and gramatically,
Its drama b my armory is sure to rip through ur armor b,
your not on my level, or even my terrestrial plain,
ur existance is limited to your carbon frame whats my name?
They call me the last son of the cosmos,
Using unholy strength to open dudes up and leave em comatose,
Then I roast there flesh using rays from the sun,
And theres no hope for planet earth cause its already done....
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Old 06-13-2008, 03:04 PM    (permalink
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If you see me on the streets dont breath my name,
Im wanted for multiple felonies in the tri county range,
They call me insane or just plain crazy,
Theres nothin slim about me but best believe that im Shady,
But im not sweet like an M&M I leave a bad taste in your mouth like green eggs and ham,
I try to keep it civil I try to keep to keep it nice,
But these mice keep playin wit my life playin wit the mic,
Playin wit the hot head thats sure to burn your wife,
Im the type to catch aids and spread it,
Your the type to catch a charge police ask for the story and you tell it,
Word for word make me pull the desert bird you wont end up on the stand,
Rather laying face down trapped in a box under LAs Vegas sand,
Yea im on that Goodfella **** but I'd rather go out like Pesci then Liota you lil *****,
Witness protection, Witness an assassination whether your new name Peter Paul or Nathan,
I really dont give a ****, you must be new to this,
Call these new cats Silverstone's cuz they all clueless,
Yeah im done but I got more bars in the oven,
I just want to let the streets know you roll wit cops like McLovin.

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Old 06-13-2008, 03:16 PM    (permalink
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trkaline u should so have a rap battle with someone do eet
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Old 06-13-2008, 03:24 PM    (permalink
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i've done it a few times drunk with ppl and stuff but mostly i just write stuff down or think of stuff when im bored and it just doesnt come as easy on the spot.
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Old 06-13-2008, 03:27 PM    (permalink
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trkaline vs. BOE, in the Chiefs Forum I say
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My influence spans Distant planets and galaxies,
If you Ali G's wanna challenge me ill disect ur anatomy graphicly and gramatically,
Its drama b my armory is sure to rip through ur armor b,
your not on my level, or even my terrestrial plain,
ur existance is limited to your carbon frame whats my name?
They call me the last son of the cosmos,
Using unholy strength to open dudes up and leave em comatose,
Then I roast there flesh using rays from the sun,
And theres no hope for planet earth cause its already done....
i like this one a lot
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My latest song "Rest":

I feel a dark cloud rising over me
And no sunshine, I can't even see
My lungs are shrinking, I can't even breathe
My head is breaking, I can't believe

That I'd kill myself today if I could
But I fear that I'm already dead
I know I should wait for better days
But I'd rather lay in my grave instead
I'd tell the devil to kill me today
But the angels know I'm already dead
So let me bleed and let me go
Just say goodbye and put me to rest

I've got bloodshot eyes and no escape
And nobody's here to make sure I'm safe
I could change it all but it's too late
Now I look in a mirror filled with hate

Cuz I'd kill myself today if I could
But I fear that I'm already dead
I know I should wait for better days
But I'd rather lay in my grave instead
I'd tell the Devil to kill me today
But the angels know I'm already dead
So let me bleed and let me go
Just say goodbye and put me to rest

I'd kill myself today if I could
But I fear that I'm already dead
I know I should wait for better days
But I'd rather lay in my grave instead
I'd tell the Devil to kill me today
But the angels know I'm already dead
So let me bleed and let me go
Just say goodbye and put me to rest

I'd tell the devil to kill me today
But the angels know I'm already dead
I'd tell the devil to kill me today
But the angels know I'm already dead
So let me bleed and let me go
Just say goodbye....

And put me to rest

(Rock song, modeled after some 3 Doors Down songs)
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Bruce Ratner's (Nets Owner) favorite bed time story:
Twas the night before free agency (2010)
when all through the house, Not a creature was stirring, not even Jay-Z;

The money was gathered with care,
In hopes that LeBron soon would be there;

The owner was nestled all snug in his bed,
While visions of LeBron danced in his head;
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trkaline, you have the lyrical range and overall writing talent but the song structures are extremely basic.
Listen to some rappers that have the ability to break off from "humpty dumpty" line structure.

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I NEED HELP!!!!

I have a chorus, and I think that I can write up the rest of the song in a hundred different ways but i'm not sure what to write about...

So tell me what this chorus makes you think of or how it makes you feel..

This world will bring you down
But will you rise back up?
Tell me, where will you go
When the going gets tough?
Will you stick to all your plans
Or are you living on a prayer?
Cuz no matter where we are
We're only halfway there


Any thoughts at all would help me tons... thanks in advance!
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Initial taste of a true addiction
At the mercy of our final good bye
Might as well have been his crucifixion
For this demise of a natural high
Society full of expectations
And a December sky will bare witness
It was not just a simple vacation
Mutual silence left him action less
In the gentle greens we stood side by side
In parking lots we only grew closer
The end was a result of self pride
Nothing on his sleeves stoned wall composure
She released the doves from the rusted cage
New material as he takes the stage
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I'm laying in a pool of blood with my chest open,
I'm like satan not yet, don't cash in my check,
I paid my debt to society im just tryin to pay rent,
It's too late to repent god dont want me no more,
So if you let me bounce this last time you can take me the next,

I know that I'm living trife, but that's what livings like,
When your young and aint got the funds to be living right,
Yeah I sold coke, yeah I sold crack, but I never sold to kids if indirectly my bad,
I'm only one man, with only one life, so every day I pray please don't take me tonight,
Sittin' on the corner supplyin the junks,can't fault me on that,
There system need the stuff, more than Biggie needed Puff, more than Scarface needed heaters, more than LL needed love,
See I provide a service for the disinfranchised and downtrodden,
But the media paint the picture of me like im a bad guy like Mr.Bin Laden,
Yeah once in awhile, people die from what I sell, But If I recall,
People die from alcohol and ciggerettes as well,

I'm laying in a pool of blood with my chest open,
I'm like satan not yet, don't cash in my check,
I paid my debt to society im just tryin to pay rent,
It's too late to repent god dont want me no more,
So if you let me bounce this last time you can take me the next,

I'm just sitting on my stoop, another day at the office,
I see a black Acura driving by slow, but that **** happens often,
Probably just another preferred customer looking for a fix,
Saw the window roll down, before I could react i got hit,
Just a leg shot, so I started to hop, As I hobble through the doorway no room to dodge, I hear a thunderclap than theres another one lodged,
Now I'm laying in my living room, Hear a voice calling out "It's all gonna be over soon, now where are the G's *****? Where are the Key's *****? We aint ******* around, hurry and tell me *****!"
The black shapes standing over me I knew that my time came,
But this is what you gotta deal wit dealin that raw cane,
So I choke out a response, one go into the back, than the last thing I hear,
Is the roar of the gat,

I'm laying in a pool of blood with my chest open,
I'm like satan not yet, don't cash in my check,
I paid my debt to society im just tryin to pay rent,
It's too late to repent god dont want me no more,
So if you let me bounce this last time you can take me the next,
It's just another man down in the ghetto, Just another man down in the ghetto,
Cause 9-5 cash he couldn't settle, So it's another man down in the ghetto.

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Im blazing such amazing portraying the symphony im staging,
Feeling caged in, just a blade of grass in the wind waving,
Smokin blunts the size of royal farms fries , to a world i have more in common with then i realize,
Just cut the ********, with that im through wit clueless stupid on the borderline of the coolest ruthless villian that I invision and my potentials only on the upswing,
So sing along word is bond ill stay thorough til im gone til my corpse is eatten by maggots and my memories so long,
I keep it wicked straight, I keep both eyes on my plate see ur hand creeping crossed the table ull see fork in face,
Cuz my minds in place, to accelerate the cosmos plan to eradicate the human race,
My rhymes are pure cuz my soul just soars in the other direction down the dark path,
Whenever i see another soul exstinguished my spirit just laughs,
Then I grab the scapple and move it across ur neck front to back, Yea I just dirt napped u b4 u got time to react.
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My eyes glaze over,
Their visions more sharp,
Dreams of a future,
Growing ever more dark

My fingers lose feeling,
No I'm not okay,
I'm shivering of cold
On a hot summer day

My feelings mistaken,
My eyes painfully true,
They see many clouds
To fill this sky so blue

This summer brought warmth,
And the masses a new,
Tomorrow their coming
For me and for you



The wind is howling at my back
The mountains screaming in my face
the battle is already won,
blood is the only thing that I taste
My scars are still tender
My struggles a waste
with thousands behind me
few have killed with such haste

my loyalty never wavered
as throughout I stayed true
no mercy in battle
for so many, that I slew
as war stole my love
my thirst for vengeance grew
and only in battle
could I find love a new

But now I am old,
tired and weak
I have fought for so long
my fate is so bleak
I await death
having fallen from my peak
i no longer worry,
of whose blood do I reek

now I can see
that I fought only myself
with not but a lighter,
and a drug filled shelf

no warriors have I slain
and the blood is all mine
so I say goodbye
for the very last time
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When it comes to the rap game I got it on lock down
Because I'm like Phil Spector, I'm the master of sound
I produce my own ****, I do it all by myself
People hear my albums and put yours on the shelf

I'm a rich ************ seen nothing but success
My rhymes pack heat, so you can expect nothing less
Tonguetie other rappers leave em fightin' for breath
By the time I'm done, won't be anyone else left

You musta missed the memo the world passed you by
So you can fill up my glass 'cause the bottom's gettin' dry
Ain't nothin' but my slave from cradle to the grave
And you know my ****'s big so you better behave

***** I'll tear you apart even when I'm on short rest
You say you're experienced, so get ready for a test
Put on your A game 'cause I've slept with the best
Better put on your best face, 'cause I'm makin a mess

You lucky you got me 'cause early bird gets the worm
I know I'm doin' good since I keep makin' you squirm
I'm like Iron Mike Tyson 'cause I can go all twelve rounds
I hope your **** can take it cause you know I'm gonna pound

Sit on your face 'cause I want your tongue lickin' my crack
Then you can pull your head forward, start workin my sack
Well it was fun while it lasted but I ain't need you no more
So I'm gonna kick you out my house like you just a filthy *****
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Yo VIP let's kick it

Ice ice baby (x2)
All right stop collaborate and listen
Ice is back with my brand new invention
Something grabs a hold of me tightly
Flow like a harpoon daily and nightly
Will it ever stop yo I don't know
Turn off the lights and I'll glow
To the extreme I rock a mic like a vandal
Light up a stage and wax a chump like a candle
Dance go rush to the speaker that booms
I'm killing your brain like a poisonous mushroom
Deadly when I play a dope melody
Anything less than the best is a felony
Love it or leave it you better gain weight
You better hit bull's eye the kid don't play
If there was a problem yo I'll solve it
Check out the hook while my DJ revolves it

CHORUS
Ice ice baby vanillla (x4)

Now that the party is jumping
With the bass kicked in and the vegas are pumpin'
Quick to the point to the point no faking
I'm cooking MC's like a pound of bacon
Burning them if you ain't quick and nimble
I go crazy when I hear a cymbal
And a hi-hat with a souped up tempo
I'm on a roll and it's time to go solo
Rollin' in my 5.0
With my rag-top down so my hair can blow
The girlies on standby waving just to say hi
Did you stop no I just drove by
Kept on pursuing to the next stop
I busted a left and I'm heading to the next block
The block was dead
Yo so I continued to A1A Beachfront Avenue
Girls were hot wearing less than bikinis
Rockman lovers driving Lamborghinis
Jealous 'cause I'm out getting mine
Shay with a guage and Vanilla with a nine
Reading for the chumps on the wall
The chumps acting ill because they're so full of eight balls
Gunshots rang out like a bell
I grabbed my nine all I heard were shells
Falling on the concrete real fast
Jumped in my car slammed on the gas
Bumpet to bumper the avenue's packed
I'm trying to get away before the jackers jack
Police on the scene you know what I mean
They passed me up confronted all the dope fiends
If there was a problem yo I'll solve it
Check out the hook while my DJ revolves it

REPEAT CHORUS

Take heed 'cause I'm a lyrical poet
Miami's on the scene just in case you didn't know it
My town that created all the bass sound
Enough to shake and kick holes in the ground
'Cause my style's like a chemical spill
Feasible rhymes that you can vision and feel
Conducted and formed
This is a hell of a concept
We make it hype and you want to step with this
Shay plays on the fade slice like a ninja
Cut like a razor blade so fast other DJs say damn
If my rhyme was a drug I'd sell it by the gram
Keep my composure when it's time to get loose
Magnetized by the mic while I kick my juice
If there was a problem yo I'll solve it
Check out the hook while Shay revolves it

Ice ice baby vanilla
Ice ice baby (oh-oh) vanilla
Ice ice baby vanilla
Ice ice baby vanilla ice
Yo man let's get out of here
Word to your mother
Ice ice baby too cold
Ice ice baby too cold too cold (x2)
Ice ice baby
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Not mine but it's been stuck in my head a while:

It’s funny when a movement makes the mainstream but still don’t do ****, but bruise a dream, produce a new level of youth unseen. And the truth is the kids are losing steam and to say it’s a shame is to undermine it. We’re talking about the most hated machine of all time its they’re playing a game with most of our lives but in November who had the patience to stand in line?

It’s plain insane, they’d come to realize it, it’s big pain, stalk a flock a sheep
Talk’s cheap when I shock ya. Used to want to street fight like Blanka,
now I just pray I don’t lose my ****** head like boss Tanaka. Rock a black bandana too tight, black man with the posture of a punk cast aside cuz I ain't white.

I’m patriotic like a fox, I hung my flag high, but musta misunderstood when Beanie Sigel was like, "ayo, light that **** the **** up" I aint white, and there’s laws for that, so I use color safe bleach at the laundrymat. and deal with it, you see how my squad react, we keep our hands warm with the damn patriot act.

We burn pages, matter a fact we burn back, it was written as an outright attack. See, you can’t fight a feeling, I feel terrified, there’s a war against me, my friends, my fam, my pride, my life, my job, my likes and like mindeds. Folks are like "pshh" like they just don’t mind it. So I’m cool right, they wag the dog we catch the lipstick. What kinda city plumber thought that he could make these old and rusty pipes fit? Well they don’t, I’m catching the drip
I’ll practice holdin’ my breath, then sink with the ship. It goes…

Hands up if you're broken but find a way to stand up. Give it up if you're hopin and never givin' up.
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cause babygirl, makin you smile is priceless [priceLISS]
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I once knew a crooked man who lived in a crooked house,
Had some crooked kids and a crooked spouse,
Worked a crooked job to put food on the crooked table for there crooked mouths,
Was he really crooked? his intentions were good,
He wanted to get out of this life even though he knew he never would,
He knew it was just a matter of geographic proximity,
He missed the chance to leave when crack entered into his vicinity,
He found a way to escape the pain so he indulged relentlessly,
He changed from master of his own destiny to slave of neccesity,
Now his children are crying cuz there all alone,
Cuz daddy introduced it to mommy and there somewhere lying on a bench zoned,

Stop me if you heard this story before,
I know you see them nodding down at the corner store,
Not bad people just bad situations,
Got caught up... in poverty's devastation,

Ya see, Willy really wasn't a bad guy,
Just at the wrong place at the wrong time,
At 15 Willy really looked up to his brother,
Daddy walked out at age 3 and mommy wasn't much of a mother,
Willy's brothers name was Darell, and Darell dealt drugs,
You could find him on the corner drinkin 40's wit the thugs,
Or shooting up in a bathroom stall in the back of the club,
But Willy didn't know that clearly, even when his brother started actin silly,
Darell sold to there mother, who was an addict herself,
Was once a young dancer forced to put her dreams on the shelf,
Went from dancing chorus line to shaking her ass,
Then she moved on to taking johns now thats where shes at,

Stop me if you heard this story before,
I know you see them nodding down at the corner store,
Not bad people just bad situations,
Got caught up... in poverty's devastation,

Willy followed Darell to a party one night,
Proceeded to get loaded noticed Darrel was nowhere in sight,
Found him in the back bedroom like hat is this?
It's that good **** willy go on take a hit,
Willy never used a needle before,
One of Darrels friends shown him the way and before long he was sprawled out on the floor,
Woke up the next day and looked to the side,
Saw Darell staring back at him with wide open eyes,
Knew what was up he started to cry,
Spent the next 10 minutes shaking him askin himself why,
Fast forward 2 years later and Willy is illin,
Patrolling the dark alley ways searching for his next victim,
6 months ago his mother passed away,
Not long after Darell od'd she contracted aids,
So on the streets he stays living life in a heroin induced daze,
Better run for the door if you get the chance to leave,
Dont end up like the crooked family....

Stop me if you heard this story before,
I know you see them nodding down at the corner store,
Not bad people just bad situations,
Got caught up... in poverty's devistation,
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This was a freestyle I did on *Dying to live* By Tupac and Biggie


Why am I runnin to live
no motivation
exasperation
in respiration
determination only leads to manifistation and in these situations
We become basic creations
whites blacks asians and hatians
n every other race is just racin
but for what
there is no prize awaitin
hand eye coordination
with the gat in placen
the barrel starin down a random victims facen
they fear whats about to take placen
why am i tryin to live in a world like this
i might be next on the list of hits
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